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She looks as if she is in severe pain...
All she does is look through that window in vain...

Why is she going through this pain?
She just stands there watching the cold rain.

What is she thinking inside her head?
She looks as if she just wants to stay in bed.

Why are there cuts on her arm?
I know she really means no harm.

Why  does she put her hair in a bun?
When she usually fixes it every day on the run.

Why does she worry so much?
If only she could see what I see, if only our opinions could touch.

I do not judge her.
Honestly, I want to get to know her.
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. You suggested this to me, and I can't believe the beauty of it--it's so deep and I just love it. Thanks for showing it to me. :hug:
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
You are welcome. :iconhappymeowplz:
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
:D I am really liking your poetry. I think 'good' doesn't START to describe it. :)
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! (Sorry I must be annoying from saying thank you so much lol... I am very grateful though. :)
Also thank you for the watch and the llama!
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
Any time! I just figured, I'd give you a Llama and :+devwatch:.:)And I don't think it's annoying. At least you're not like "Oh, yeah, I DESERVED that. No need to thank you". I prefer thanks over that. :)
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Hahaha yea. :) I prefer thank you's over that too.
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah. It's always nice to see people thanking vs. wallowing in the comments.
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I totally agree!
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CheesecakeMcArthur Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I just came across this, I just wanted to tell you I loved it. It really touched me, great job!
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! It was meant to touch people :)
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