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She looks as if she is in severe pain...
All she does is look through that window in vain...

Why is she going through this pain?
She just stands there watching the cold rain.

What is she thinking inside her head?
She looks as if she just wants to stay in bed.

Why are there cuts on her arm?
I know she really means no harm.

Why  does she put her hair in a bun?
When she usually fixes it every day on the run.

Why does she worry so much?
If only she could see what I see, if only our opinions could touch.

I do not judge her.
Honestly, I want to get to know her.
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. You suggested this to me, and I can't believe the beauty of it--it's so deep and I just love it. Thanks for showing it to me. :hug:
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
You are welcome. :iconhappymeowplz:
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
:D I am really liking your poetry. I think 'good' doesn't START to describe it. :)
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! (Sorry I must be annoying from saying thank you so much lol... I am very grateful though. :)
Also thank you for the watch and the llama!
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
Any time! I just figured, I'd give you a Llama and :+devwatch:.:)And I don't think it's annoying. At least you're not like "Oh, yeah, I DESERVED that. No need to thank you". I prefer thanks over that. :)
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Hahaha yea. :) I prefer thank you's over that too.
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The-nyaner Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah. It's always nice to see people thanking vs. wallowing in the comments.
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I totally agree!
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CheesecakeMcArthur Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I just came across this, I just wanted to tell you I loved it. It really touched me, great job!
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! It was meant to touch people :)
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CheesecakeMcArthur Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
You're welcome, keep up the good work! :)
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! I will surely do so! (after exams of course) xD
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CheesecakeMcArthur Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
No problem!
Ew, exams. Reminds me of a test I should be studying for right now and homework I should be doing for school in something like 7 hours. Plus I should maybe sleep... xD
Yeah, good luck with your exams!
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks! Goodluck with your homework and test! xD
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CheesecakeMcArthur Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Thanks! :)
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deanwillms Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
WHY DO I CRY TO ALL OF YOUR POEMS!? There so beautiful :'(
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwh thank you :love:
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deanwillms Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Your welcome *sniffle*
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
<3
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deanwillms Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
I <3 U
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
AWH I <3 YOU TOO
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PaulineFrench Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It doesn't describe me perfectly, but I understand the girl you've written about. Honestly, I wish more people would act upon their want and ask questions. Get to know them, get to know why they're so obviously hurting and lonely.
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Same. I mostly write these poems because I have been like this. Hurting and lonely. I just try to show the world not to be afraid of people who are... you know different or struggling. Honestly I want them to know that if they were in the same position as the hurting, they would probably want someone to ask what's wrong and talk to them. Not just ignore them or be afraid to understand their pain. If people were just more sensitive in this world and caring, then a lot of people wouldn't be struggling with horrible pain and suffering. Heck I probably wouldn't be going through my depression if people actually cared. But that's for everyone else to learn on their own. You can't force it upon someone. So I write these poems to show there is really nothing to be afraid about and that the struggling are humans too.
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Vegetax1a7 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I have no words that can describe this beautiful poem
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! ^.^ That means a lot to me
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Asomatica Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
US. Who would've thought. Nice house-mouse poem.
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much :D
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mypuppetboresme Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I always understood you. What makes you think I would not now?
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snokkedoedel Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
then what is the reason she's doing that?
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Hannychan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
i don't know if u actually saw a girl like that, but it was very real! and i saw it several times but u described better that what i thought in that moment. Good poem!!
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :heart: that means a lot to me
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oelbaz Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
she's sitting there crying her broken dreams...
her sadness, tells they were many as it seems...
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she once had a family and home
now her life is lost within the storm
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow that's good O: :)
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oelbaz Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
it's how i feel my self, your words, i loved them
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed my words (: All these poems I write come from the heart. ^.^
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Kuchkovskaya Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It-s so wonderfulll, great, it so ... I didnt have any worlds to say, great jobl!!!!
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katiebrailsford Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! :heart:
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